tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post4747290907169814666..comments2023-08-06T06:28:15.872-07:00Comments on Story Time: 370-5402Glass Mannequinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10252090109273920288noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-47929786885450414192009-02-25T07:03:00.000-08:002009-02-25T07:03:00.000-08:00The only reason that I'm commenting now is too poi...The only reason that I'm commenting now is too point out one mistake. Basically, I'm just leaving the fact that your writing is awesome assumed. So, here it is: I noticed that, near the end of this post, you describe the main character shifting his left hand to scales and feathers while shifting his left hand to a claw. He can't have two left hands (or can he? hmmm ;) so, unless that was deliberate, I suggest just changing one of those hands to a right hand :D.Edward Jessehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17519520935701704427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-29796472567317990472008-11-22T22:54:00.000-08:002008-11-22T22:54:00.000-08:00Hey, just found your blog.Great piece of writing! ...Hey, just found your blog.<BR/><BR/>Great piece of writing! It's very detailed and creative.<BR/><BR/>All the best to your writing.Fizahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04948804397750800367noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-65836963598234357672008-11-15T09:33:00.000-08:002008-11-15T09:33:00.000-08:00You poasted this TWO months ago!Does that mean i h...You poasted this TWO months ago!<BR/>Does that mean i have to wait two months for every new chapter?!?!<BR/><BR/>Well if it has to take that long to make them as good as they are, then i would wait a whole YEAR!<BR/><BR/>no! forget i said that! 6 months MAX!21stCenturyHippyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02280623533404742099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-78820462309306684242008-11-10T14:32:00.000-08:002008-11-10T14:32:00.000-08:00Glad I stumbled on your blog. I look forward to t...Glad I stumbled on your blog. I look forward to the continuing saga. I must admit that I was feeling some of the same <I>"Confusion"</I> as the character by the end of the last post. But at the same time, I'm intrigued and will continue reading.Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-72829615735821924042008-11-07T22:16:00.000-08:002008-11-07T22:16:00.000-08:00Hey!! Waz up?Hey!! Waz up?PhilO♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/02754122680372548153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-28102940668020334512008-10-28T08:26:00.000-07:002008-10-28T08:26:00.000-07:00wow this is pretty intense. I like it.wow this is pretty intense. I like it.Alayna Whisperhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12826654440974656739noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-32967028295839535832008-09-27T18:31:00.000-07:002008-09-27T18:31:00.000-07:00this is goodthis is goodAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-62222187438956006572008-09-27T10:34:00.000-07:002008-09-27T10:34:00.000-07:00Wow. I am in awe!! The way you write really draws ...Wow. I am in awe!! The way you write really draws readers in; I felt all the emotions and everything. You are a very talented writer!<BR/><BR/>Well done! Keep writing, this story is magnificent so far!<BR/><BR/>~ Megangem backwards (:https://www.blogger.com/profile/13842618949732561042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-72632075110566257852008-09-25T18:14:00.000-07:002008-09-25T18:14:00.000-07:00Very nice. Well made, intense, you can really 'fee...Very nice. Well made, intense, you can really 'feel' the emotion and frustration in the story. Keep writing, you're really good.ƉдЯǨ ȐЄΪƝhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01585632314738041875noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-62702849804104796032008-09-23T01:44:00.000-07:002008-09-23T01:44:00.000-07:00tHankx for droppin by n your comment =)your story ...tHankx for droppin by n your comment =)<BR/>your story is wow keep writing!<BR/>waitin for the on-comin chapters!jEeRohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10408690371213995609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-40156260983069926542008-09-22T16:56:00.000-07:002008-09-22T16:56:00.000-07:00Thanks for commenting!! I love when people do stor...Thanks for commenting!! I love when people do story blogs, I can't wait to start reading:D<BR/>Lots of Love,<BR/>RollingStone007Kendall Evahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08450194361536356937noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-17950823036019973112008-09-21T15:30:00.000-07:002008-09-21T15:30:00.000-07:00Your blog is so well written!!! I am impressed, th...Your blog is so well written!!! I am impressed, this is really,really good!!!<BR/><BR/>Thanks for the comment about my poem, I think it is definitly going to happen..<BR/><BR/>KrosemarieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-9055409315795438872008-09-20T20:27:00.000-07:002008-09-20T20:27:00.000-07:00LOved it!!LOved it!!Manga Dorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14249329073231922190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-64595375076925785922008-09-20T19:31:00.000-07:002008-09-20T19:31:00.000-07:00thanks for commenting on my bog. im going to add y...thanks for commenting on my bog. im going to add you on my list.autumnrosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17562793274310201297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-83934303907352598082008-09-20T17:42:00.000-07:002008-09-20T17:42:00.000-07:00Um.. translation for the above comment.. please te...Um.. translation for the above comment.. please tell me what the book is about, the words (title preferably) you would like on the banner and what the main characters, character looks like.. I try my best.. lol.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04702671202953044394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-74546170583741140322008-09-20T15:47:00.000-07:002008-09-20T15:47:00.000-07:00I try too. Um, give me the title and breif descipt...I try too. Um, give me the title and breif desciption of the book. and Breif decription of the main characters...https://www.blogger.com/profile/04702671202953044394noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-29251582557021727422008-09-20T15:20:00.000-07:002008-09-20T15:20:00.000-07:00I really enjoyed this--the story drew me in and ke...I really enjoyed this--the story drew me in and kept my interest piqued. Can't wait for the next installment!<BR/><BR/>OH! How wondrous it must have been getting those Ray stories from someone who was there! I'm envious! ;) "Zen in the Art of Writing" is an awesome book and he also authored my favorite poem (by one of the "greats"): "Go Panther-Pawed Where All the Mined Truths Sleep." Just brilliant!<BR/><BR/>Thanks!DreamMatrixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14853596079857634853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-71634743068949461712008-09-20T02:23:00.000-07:002008-09-20T02:23:00.000-07:00hey !! Nice one !!hey !! Nice one !!PhilO♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/02754122680372548153noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-84072641921842555802008-09-19T12:09:00.000-07:002008-09-19T12:09:00.000-07:00god....I am going to have to start from the begini...god....I am going to have to start from the begining huh? oh wells....Here i goes! Im sure its really good! Now on to the begining!A writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05805746244814547241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-29043273713347757872008-09-14T17:23:00.000-07:002008-09-14T17:23:00.000-07:00Hey.Whats up?Cool Blog!♥♥CLAiiR3TH3ROCK3R♥♥Hey.<BR/>Whats up?<BR/>Cool Blog!<BR/><BR/>♥♥CLAiiR3TH3ROCK3R♥♥♥♥CLAiiR3TH3ROCK3R♥♥https://www.blogger.com/profile/05914540572502452876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-7625773887169716552008-09-13T21:54:00.000-07:002008-09-13T21:54:00.000-07:00lovely. i like that in reading it, you can actuall...lovely. i like that in reading it, you can actually feel the frustration and curiosity, but most of all the intensity of the emotion. bravoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-47121547280629388752008-09-13T16:17:00.000-07:002008-09-13T16:17:00.000-07:00Dang, you like to type more than me, and that is s...Dang, you like to type more than me, and that is saying something.<BR/><BR/>I like the story.<BR/>I am trying to write one. I will post soon on my blog of a new story i am working on.<BR/>Come visit, enjoys poems, student life's, and stories from the authours.<BR/><BR/>Come and visit, soon.MusWriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14022303402198105653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-65703713184424879272008-09-13T08:11:00.000-07:002008-09-13T08:11:00.000-07:00thanks so much for the sweet comment on my blog! w...thanks so much for the sweet comment on my blog! welcome back anytime!!Wendivahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07554094463872511461noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6085236242968632133.post-13900573987350114252008-09-11T17:59:00.000-07:002008-09-11T17:59:00.000-07:00You are very thorough(which I probably can't spell...You are very thorough(which I probably can't spell at the moment) in how the boy will succeed in using his power. I think you've accomplished that. Some really intense descriptions. I liked "gout of fire"..how the scroll disappears.<BR/><BR/>All the best on your writing.<BR/><BR/>I'm surprised you would even want to look at any of my stuff actually. I guess I'm pretty much character driven and I know that only part of writing.<BR/><BR/>Keep writing. I know you'll stay creative.Caithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09728698992568194537noreply@blogger.com